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[HamenChiz]

looks good,
but don't get to far away from your lift! you might get out of speed!

p.s. your orange connector at the top of the overbanked looks ugly

Thanks, I fixed the orange connector and replaced it with a clean one

20 pictures. That is a lot for just an overbank. Anyways, I really like the flow of this, just make the overbank about a yellow skinnier, and it will be perfect. If that doesn't work, then make it a hammerhead.

Ok Sir alpal. WILL DO.

Thanks for commenting guys, anymore comments, i'm waiting.

[The Stig]

The overbank looks either too wide or too low... Or you could make it a cutback.
Everything else looks good.

[HamenChiz]

The overbank looks either too wide or too low... Or you could make it a cutback.
Everything else looks good.

Thanks, maybe i'll make it a bit slimmer like a yellow rod.

[maarten12]

^it will get better, yes. It would be nice if you get us a picture without that train on the transition, then we can have a look at that too.

[HamenChiz]

^it will get better, yes. It would be nice if you get us a picture without that train on the transition, then we can have a look at that too.

Thanks, maybe in my next update.

[HamenChiz]

DP

Update:

I've made the overbanked turn into a cutback, I just can't get the overbanked turn to get shaped in the smoothest possible way.

Now pictures of the cutback:


Please share you opinion about my coaster.

Be harsh.

Share everything you want me to do to this coaster.

Be HARSH!!

EDIT* Test Video:

[KHrulez]

ok, you wanted harsh. well, here 'goes *breathes in deeply*

it sucks

add weights and lubrication to your cars for more speed so you can make it longer

you got bumps and straight spots cause you need to use 3X more x-ties

try to be a little more realistic and creative with your layout

work on your supports

im suprised you could even shape it this well with so few crossties1 so imagine what it would be like if you added more

learn the basics of lift hills and crests

d-d-d-dd-dats all folks!


well you wanted harsh.......

[HamenChiz]

ok, you wanted harsh. well, here 'goes *breathes in deeply*

it sucks

add weights and lubrication to your cars for more speed so you can make it longer

you got bumps and straight spots cause you need to use 3X more x-ties

try to be a little more realistic and creative with your layout

work on your supports

im suprised you could even shape it this well with so few crossties1 so imagine what it would be like if you added more

learn the basics of lift hills and crests

d-d-d-dd-dats all folks!


well you wanted harsh.......

First thing is that I don't have ALOT of X-TIES

Why does it suck, you haven't even built a single coaster.

I've already learned the basics of lift hills and crests, am I stupidly wrong?
Nothings wrong with my lift hill and it works great.

The cars are lubricated and i'm only going for a short layout.

I'm being as creative as I can, what's even wrong with the layout and that's my style.

[Kevkillerke]

don't listen to him!
it doesn't suck, it's a nice lay-out, it's just sad that you haven't that much crosties.

for your cutback, i don't know much about that element, sorry

[HamenChiz]

don't listen to him!
it doesn't suck, it's a nice lay-out, it's just sad that you haven't that much crosties.

for your cutback, i don't know much about that element, sorry

Thanks. I've changed the cutback and converted it into the good old Overbanked turn, then the next element to the overbanked turn will be a very low cutback the going to the station.

EDIT*: But my father bought me 18 pounds of knex (Big Ball tower and hyperspace training tower) and an additional screamin serpent. And as I calculated my knex will going double the number.

[HamenChiz]

DP"

UPDATE:

I guess changing the overbanked turn doesn't help me going to my style.

Pictures:


Please comment.

Be harsh!!

I don't recommend you to comment if you're just going to tell something unimportant or if you're just going to spam.

Comments like "It's really cool" like this and like that are not counted as spam.

Thank you.

EDIT*:TEST VIDEO

[RNB]

Looks cool, and nice trains! The only problem I see is the turn between the immelman and the overbank. The transitions into the other elements are looking bumpy. Could we get better pictures for that?

[HamenChiz]

Looks cool, and nice trains! The only problem I see is the turn between the immelman and the overbank. The transitions into the other elements are looking bumpy. Could we get better pictures for that?

Thanks.

Here you go: (NOTE THE TURN HAS BEEN SHORTENED A BIT SINCE THE LAST UPDATE)

[Britfag]

Yeah, that turn looks way better, what's next in the layout?

[HamenChiz]

Yeah, that turn looks way better, what's next in the layout?

Maybe a small buckel.

Thanks!

[HamenChiz]

UPDATE!!

I've made a small Heartlinish Zero G-Roll, the exit will be a helix going to the right(When you're facing the computer)



Please leave an opinion or a comment.

I need your words.

Thanks.

And oh yeah be Very HARSH!!

[Britfag]

The roll looks okay, but the transition could use more strength

And the roll needs more support! Way more support!

[Kevyn230]

To me it doesn't look like your going to get back to the lift.

[Eggo]

You know your lift isn't straight, right?

[Kevkillerke]

indeed it needs more support!
and you may not get to far away from your station!

also, could you ad an enter between every picture?